Answer:
Developing Business Writing Techniques
Improving messages by using mechanical emphasis, parallelism, voice, and well-placed descriptions:
1. Devices:
Stylistic devices—used sparingly—can be an effective way to emphasize explanatory information.
2. Stylistic devices used to achieve emphasis:
a. Position important ideas first or last in a sentence.
b. Use vivid words.
3. De-emphasize bad news
4. When to use the Passive Voice:
To emphasize an action instead of the recipient of an action
To conceal the doer of an action
5. Passive
6. Sentence with better parallel structure:
If you write well, speak well, and use good interpersonal skills, you will do well in this corporation.
7. Best Revision:
Flipping through the report, Teagan saw the recommendations.
8. Not emphasizing important ideas
9. Congratulations! We would like to offer you the position of senior analyst.
Explanation:
Stylistic devices help writers to achieve emphasis and readers to achieve understanding of the message being communicated. Â While they should be used economically, their presence in any writing acts as an effective way to improve messages.