Can i get some feed back on my written story and let me know about my character description on the second page ..?
ENGLISH!!

Can i get some feed back on my written story and let me know about my character description on the second page ENGLISH class=
Can i get some feed back on my written story and let me know about my character description on the second page ENGLISH class=

Respuesta :

I think it’s good and I love how you came from a different approach I would’ve taken, there’s a sense of familiarity with this and I don’t think you need to change anything!